Tim Colby
2 min readDec 25, 2020

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Don't know diddly about the streaming production business, however I think your mind should resolve that the endpoint of the story if it reaches video will have a high probably on a streaming platform. Any kind of classic theatre platform seems gone for another year at this time. Anyway post a link somewhere when the story is finished, we will read it, if legal.

The opening sequence seems a little bit like an action trailer we might see on Youtube teasers. I know folks like that are said to have all their artistic taste in their mouth, and of course I don't know anyone like that, who enjoys car crashes, blood and guts flying everywhere, anything over the top action craziness, no, I don't know anyone like that, no no.

One potential twist is, don't know yet how city smart the first character is supposed to be like, but for yet another change up, there could be a plain Jane blend into the wallpaper 'Sally Ann Howes' style character suddenly thrown into the opening scene somehow, that might play to automans like me who live in the quiet suburbs of the midwest where nothing ever happens except the occasional doorbell ringing, phony sales people, and an occasional tree TP squad visitation. (btw: I get it, it's 2020 please don't check our crime reports, especially shootings)I've driven around the streets of Chicago very sparingly, like when I must, and Holy stranger in a strange land, I'm thinking about escaping asap.

Happy holidazzzzzze.🎄+🍸= mental nirvana.

Not much happening, except this journalistic gem: From NYPost, picked up by my boss, (ahem), some of the worst trashy linkbait of the day, especially Xmas of all days, something about a body builder MAY have to spend Xmas holiday alone cause his sex doll was broke. Oh the humanity!!! I humbly apologize in advance.

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Tim Colby
Tim Colby

Written by Tim Colby

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